Keeping in mind who the target audience is, guests and new crew, the "Primer" is a nice place to start them. The suggested edits though would help it be better. It's better to start newbies on the right foot, and parts of the boat is that start. Getting more people comfortable and excited about sailing and boating in general is so important for us to keep the industry strong. Anything that we can do to help bring more knowledgable people to our business or past-time, the better.