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Alex, the "outhaul" one is concise and well-presented. I must say that your command of sail control words in English is exceptional...probably because those are the most interesting words to you, like "Molson's" and "exchange rate". Also, the drawings and the little animated arrows were well done and easy to follow. It's nice to see this stuff (even though I already know it), because it shows the entire process in a logical order.
Anyway, well done. I think in some ways the fact that you are explaining things in English is a positive, because you have to work harder than a native speaker to be as unambiguous as possible, which is sometimes difficult for a native English speaker to accomplish.
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