I think you are doing a great job. So few sailors have a prepared well thought out speach, and don't cover things until its too late. As time passes, you will become better and better at it and realize what to keep in and what to keep out. Keep up the good work.
Two items, don't forget to finish by reminding them to have fun! and Possibly discuss seasickness.
I went to a lecture (sort of) at MIT about a sea sickness study done for NASA (I guess every trip to space someone hurls in the space suit). I could give a brief rendition of the findings if anyone is interested.
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Captain Don Quackenbush
SV HERMES, Pearson 33
East Coast, Great Lakes