[boatbum]

Everyone is watching and is curious about Regatta Point, but quite honestly, I haven’t a clue what you were trying to say, nor the point you were trying to make. If you are really going to write that book, please take this as constructive criticism. In your quest to impress the reader with your vocabulary, the reader will miss the entire point or become disinterested after about the third sentence. Try to keep the words in line with your audience. You are not going before a doctoral panel, but rather trying to inform and enlighten others. The use of short common words will reach many more and hold their interest long enough to reach the point of your topic. The way it reads now is incomprehensible.