Last Man Standing
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Re: Paragon's North Atlantic Adventure
After watching the last two, I'm going to disagree with my comment above a bit and agree with nine. The cross-dissolve technique is really good to pull out the stammering, etc. At the same time, it might be a touch overdone. It's good to keep the flow - but it's also good to have the natural conversation as much as possible. Maybe just a balance.
Apart from that nitpick - you do a great job of communicating the emotion of things (via the editing, the music, etc.). Good story telling. By the time you let out the big sigh when the anchor is finally set, I relax with you guys. Well done.
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