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George - while removing the myriad tongue sticks from your tale (which I thought just added extra color) - you accidentally removed a good chunk of the story including the "maudlin" segue which was critical IMO. Anyway, still awesome.
As for me, I just ordered a fine cutlass for my upcoming spin trip. I figure if a knife will do - a sword's even better - and easier to get to - and makes you look just a bit more insane.
T - dude, it was a race. Lighten up. Can you get any more wet-blanketier? You may be better off starting an SMS thread (safe mellow sails) if this one causes you ill health. I mean, you're definitely always welcome, but ya gotta go with it baby! I'm just concerned about you. Find something in the story to build on and give some good advice (like the knife thing) then stop typing and take some deep breaths.